藤校发布文书最新要求，名校满分文书都长这样！
日期：2022-07-29 09:40:47 阅读量：0 &苍产蝉辫;&苍产蝉辫;&苍产蝉辫;作者：产老师文书写作更像一场文字版的面试，精彩的文书能让招生官更好地评估学生的英语表达能力，还可以让招生官有效地了解学生的综合实力，为申请增添竞争力。藤校发布文书最新要求，看看名校满分文书都长哪样！
藤校发布最新文书申请要求
虽然普林斯顿大学还未公布2022-2023年的补充文书题目，但该校非常看重学生的英语学术写作能力。因为除了补充文书的要求，普林斯顿大学都会有一个Graded Written Paper。
今年布朗大学给2022-23年的新生和转学生们，一共布置了3道补充文书：
1.Brown’s Open Curriculum allows students to explore broadly while also diving deeply into their academic pursuits. Tell us about any academic interests that excite you, and how you might use the Open Curriculum to pursue them while also embracing topics with which you are unfamiliar. (200-250 words)
2.Brown’s culture fosters a community in which students challenge the ideas of others and have their ideas challenged in return, promoting a deeper and clearer understanding of the complex issues confronting society. This active engagement in dialogue is as present outside the classroom as it is in academic spaces. Tell us about a time you were challenged by a perspective that differed from your own. How did you respond? (200-250 words)
3.Brown students care deeply about their work and the world around them. Students find contentment, satisfaction, and meaning in daily interactions and major discoveries. Whether big or small, mundane or spectacular, tell us about something that brings you joy. (200-250 words)
相比去年，达特茅斯学院今年除了补充文书题目内容改变了以外，还比去年多了一道题。
达特茅斯学院要求申请人对以下叁篇附加文书题目写简短的回答：
新一年申请季，
文书该如何破题？
每年，都会有同学凭借一封出彩的文书，逆袭进入顶尖梦校。但高质量的申请文书应该怎么写？什么样的文书才能打动招生官的出彩文书？如何通过撰写文书，展示自己的特质？怎么写才叫“不落俗套”？
好的文书应该是简洁、真实、有意义的，可以将申请生与同龄人区分开来，紧扣题眼是主文书写作的必要法则，可总有些学生写着写着就跑题了。这时候找准切入点就非常有必要！比如在写学业成绩或专业奖项时，学生要考虑到是否与其他的申请材料重复。优秀的文书应该包含在申请中其他任何地方都没有的信息，如果只是一而再，再而叁的重复，难免会给招生官留下不好的印象。
无一例外地，大学想在文书中看到学生的潜力，看到他们有逻辑地叙述自己的过往经历。这些叙述应该使用具体的细节和例子，甚至是从现有的经历出发，去联系到本没有想到的事情，延伸故事内涵，思考这件事对于自己成长的独特意义。
《纽约时报》最佳文书示例
为了让大家对文书创作有更清晰的认知，最后美世酱也分享下今年纽约时报刊登的思想和故事俱佳的优秀文书示例。
Adrienne Coleman，教友会学校， 纽约长岛
N.Y. — Friends Academy
My mom finds a baffling delight from drinking from glass, hotel-grade water dispensers. Even when three-day-old lemon rinds float in stale water, drinking from the dispenser remains luxurious. Last year for her birthday, I saved enough to buy a water dispenser for our kitchen counter.
However, instead of water, I filled it with handwritten notes encouraging her to chase her dreams of a career.
As I grew older, I noticed that my mom yearned to pursue her passions and to make her own money. She spent years as a stay-at-home mom and limited our household chores as much as she could, taking the burden upon herself so that my brothers and I could focus on our education.
However, I could tell from her curiosity of and attitudes toward working women that she envied their financial freedom and the self-esteem that must come with it. When I asked her about working again, she would tell me to focus on achieving the American dream that I knew she had once dreamed for herself.
For years, I watched her effortlessly light up conversations with both strangers and family. Her empathy and ability to understand the needs, wants and struggles of a diverse group of people empowered her to reach the hearts of every person at a dinner table, even when the story itself did not apply to them at all.
She could make anyone laugh, and I wanted her to be paid for it. “Mom, have you ever thought about being a stand-up comedian?”
She laughed at the idea, but then she started wondering aloud about what she would joke about and how comedy shows were booked. As she began dreaming of a comedy career, the reality of her current life as a stay-at-home mom sank in. She began to cry and told me it was too late for her. I could not bear to watch her struggle between ambition and doubt.
Her birthday was coming up. Although I had already bought her a present, I realized what I actually wanted to give her was the strength to finally put herself first and to take a chance.
I placed little notes of encouragement inside the water dispenser. I asked my family and her closest friends to do the same. These friends told her other friends, and eventually I had grown a network of supporters who emailed me their admiration for my mom.
From these emails, I hand wrote 146 notes, crediting all of these supporters that also believed in my mom. Some provided me with sentences, others with five-paragraph-long essays. Yet, each note was an iteration of the same sentiment: “You are hilarious, full of life, and ready to take on the stage.”
On the day of her birthday, my mom unwrapped my oddly shaped present and saw the water dispenser I bought her. She was not surprised, as she had hinted at it for many years.
But then as she kept unwrapping, she saw that inside the dispenser there were these little notes that filled the whole thing. As she kept picking out and reading the notes, I could tell she was starting to believe what they said. She started to weep with her hands full of notes. She could not believe the support was real, that everyone knew she had a special gift and believed in her.
Within two months, my mom performed her first set in a New York comedy club. Within a year, my mom booked a monthly headlining show at the nation’s premier comedy club.
I am not sure what happened to the water dispenser. But I have read the notes with my mom countless times. They are framed and line the walls of her new office space that she rented with the profits she made from working as a professional comedian. For many parents, their children’s careers are their greatest accomplishment, but for me my mom’s is mine.
优弗教育首次独家采用“双团队”导师模式-“顿辞耻产濒别罢别补尘”。团队一：由两位主导师组成为“首席专家顾问团队”。团队二：由叁位导师组成为“规划执行团队”。在优弗独具特色的“双团队”指导下，具备专业性，联动性以及高执行力这叁大特点，让整体规划突破传统留学导师架构，真正突显每一位导师在学生身上可发展力，可塑造力，从而将服务做实，做精，做细！！！
